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Sweet Embrace

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Precious smile,
Honey sweet eyes.
Sweet embrace.
Soft words,
Warm voice.
Sweet Embrace.
All in one,
All for me.
That sweet embrace.
Happy 6 Months !!

x3; The piccy is from a joke I made with him one day in an email how he had made me super happy and I was talking like a little kid again due to it. I soon afterwards desided I was going to draw me as a little kid with him. Oo; Wasn't exactly supposed to be like this picture but yeah. x3; I desided after I drew it, the title would make a great poem! So, I'll color the piccy later I really want to get the poem up!

[edit]Fixed the poem. I like this poem a lot better. Different from my usual style but this is how the words came to me. Oo; And thus I wrote them. I hope you enjoy this newer version as much as me![/edit]
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i think this could be a lot better if you really put some detail into it. sweet as what? peaceful how? try using some different adjectives and youll be rocking :)